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Re: ATST Snippet #1
Post by Alistair   » Sun Aug 14, 2016 8:22 pm

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My thoughts:

Dohlar will flip Alverez (army) and Thirsk (Navy) and his sympathetic naval Intendant will see to that.

Dohlar may be able to cut some sort of deal to stop its citys getting flattened after the war as punishment for the torture/murder of POWs. What deal that would be I don't know joining the empire as a province? joining Siddarmark?

Too hard to tell from here but before people think its too far fetched that Dohlar would become part of the Empire I would say that what makes little sense from a practical sense makes HUGE sense from the inner circle end game plan.

That end game is infecting Dohlar with all of the Charis ideas and beleifs and allow Dohlar to be a base to spread to Harchong and the Temple lands and beyond.
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Re: ATST Snippet #1
Post by DMcCunney   » Sun Aug 14, 2016 9:39 pm

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Alistair wrote:My thoughts:

Dohlar will flip Alverez (army) and Thirsk (Navy) and his sympathetic naval Intendant will see to that.

Quite possible, thouigh the devil is in the implementation details.

Dohlar may be able to cut some sort of deal to stop its citys getting flattened after the war as punishment for the torture/murder of POWs. What deal that would be I don't know joining the empire as a province? joining Siddarmark?

Too hard to tell from here but before people think its too far fetched that Dohlar would become part of the Empire I would say that what makes little sense from a practical sense makes HUGE sense from the inner circle end game plan.

That end game is infecting Dohlar with all of the Charis ideas and beleifs and allow Dohlar to be a base to spread to Harchong and the Temple lands and beyond.

I don't see a need for Dohlor to become a province of the Charisian Empire.

One issue against it is geography. The Empire is currently Chisholm, Corisande, Zebediah, Tarot, Emerald, and (Old) Charis. That's a cluster of nations all in one contiguous area, and a natural grouping for such a polity. Dohlor is rather farther afield.*

What Charis wants is to break the stronghold of Mother Church. The Charisian Empire is a means to that end. Hahrald of Charis never wanted an empire. He was happy ruling Charis. Hector of Corisande did want one, and had dreams of turning the League of Corisande into what the Charisian Empire became. Cayleb didn't want an empire either, nor did Sharleyan, but saw it as the only way to stand against the Church.

Cayleb and Sharleyan added Corisande, Zebediah, Tarot, and Emerald to the flock largely because of strategic necessity. The lines had been drawn, and you were either part of Charis or you were part of Mother Church's alliance. It's why Sharleyan told Irys Corisande couldn't be independent again with Prince Daivyn on the throne. Irys probably already knew that, even if she didn't want to admit it, and Earl Coris certainly knew it. If Corisande were permitted independence, the Church would do everything in its power to snap it up, and almost certainly succeed.

But I don't see Cayleb and Sharleyan trying to add more provinces to the Empire. What they have is a coherent unit. I don't think either wants the Empire to eventually include the entire world. When the dust settles after the Jihad, I think Charis will be perfectly with other realms being independent, and their attitude will be "We are now at peace. You used to be enemies, but we'd much rather have you as friends. We'll respect you in your sovereignty if you respect us in ours. Let's sign treaties and start trading for our mutual benefit! Notice how well our provinces are doing since we eliminated trade barriers and encouraged economic development?"

Dohlor doesn't need to be a province of Charis to benefit, and Charis doesn't need them to be. They just need to be permanently out of the Jihad and out from under the thumb of Mother Church. And the efforts Dohlor has been making to modernize it's industrial plant to better serve the needs to the Jihad are the sort of things Charis wants to see everybody doing, for the benefit of all Safehold. An incentive for Dohlor will be the possibility of being able to far surpass Desnair in wealth and prosperity, and look down their noses at Desnair's backwardness. "Desnair could do what we've done, but you Desnairian great nobles are all born with your heads up your arses. Tough. That's what you get for being stupid." The reaction of Desnair should be highly amusing. :P

* And speaking of which, a question I'd have for Dunstyn Oliver would be "If you wanted to make the fastest possible blue water capable steamship, how fast could it be?" A major issue the Empire faces is the fact that it spans a large area of ocean. Cayleb and Sharleyan already have the problem of transit times between Cheryath and Tellesburg to meet the constitution mandated requirement of having dual capital cities. Archbishop Michael will face even worse problems in traveling between the realms whose Church he is prelate of. I don't think the spare capacity exists to build them now, but I think fast VIP transports that can shrug off things like hurricanes and get senior Charisians to and from the various parts of the Empire in less time than it currently takes will be a definite need.
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Re: ATST Snippet #1
Post by McGuiness   » Sun Aug 14, 2016 11:45 pm

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DMcCunney wrote:
McGuiness wrote:Let's keep in mind that Clyntahn has no military authority to issue orders to the army or navy, which Kaitswyrth should have taken into consideration!

Clyntahn and cronies had been leaning on the long standing tradition that secular realms cooperate when called upon by Mother Church. It's how he got Chisholm, Corisande, Emerald, Tarot, and Dohlor to combines their navies under Hector of Corisande's overall command to go and crush Charis. It wasn't till after their combined navies suffered a crushing defeat that the CoGA realized they needed military power not borrowed from secular supporters and began trying to create it.

So if Thirsk refuses to obey an order from Clyntahn or anyone in the Inquisition for his fleet to engage in a hopeless assault against the ICN when it arrives with KH VII battleships, he hasn't done anything wrong.

Legally, no. In practice it's another matter.

Remember, he commands the Dohlaran Royal Navy. If King Ronald sends the same order, then Thirsk will have to examine his oath to the navy and his king. Do those oaths require him to sacrifice himself and his men on a mission that is nothing less than suicide? Did his king prevent his family from being seized as pawns by the Inquisition? Has his King acted with honor, or besmirched Thirsk's honor by turning his Charisian POWs over to the Inquisition - twice!

The question is whether Ranhyld will issue that order if Clyntahn says to. He's been depicted as a man totally unfit for his position, who had already had theoretical discussions with his First Councilor about abdicating, and hasn't done so only because the next in succession isn't old enough to assume the throne under Dohlaran law.

It's possible he'll dither into effective catatonia if told to issue the order. There's no way he'll refuse, but he might just be paralyzed into doing nothing. That will present a pretty predicament for Clyntahn. What does he do? Try to have the Inquisition arrest King Rahnyld? Leaving aside the minor problem of who will do the arresting and take him into custody, actually trying might have unintended consequences in Dohlor. I doubt any senior Dohlorans have much respect for Rahnyld, but he is their King, and they take their oaths seriously. The Inquisition arresting Rahnyld for not ordering Thirk and his navy to commit suicide by sallying against the ICN won't go over well.

But the alternatives for Thirsk will be either sit tight in port, get his people off their ships and to shore, and watch the ICN destroy his fleet, or formally surrender and have his ships confiscated and his men taken into custody as POWs. He'll know Charis will treat them honorably, but it will really go against the grain.

If it comes to it, Thirsk will probably sally and take losses to defend Gorath, but order surrender at the point where any rational observer will agree that further combat will simply get every ship sunk and every crew member killed.

I suspect Charis will prefer to do as little damage as possible, and will settle for a point where they can tell the Dohloran government:

"This can stop. We want Rahnyld's head for turning over our honorably surrendered prisoners to the Inquisition to face the Punishment. Depose Rahnyld and let us hang him or do it yourselves, replace him with a new King or a Regency Council till his successor is old enough, and drop out the Jihad and sign a treaty of neutrality that you actually keep and we'll go away and leave you alone. If we have to come back, we won't stop with Rahnyld's head, and every senior member of your government will need to find a deep hole to hide in.

And while you're at it, given who got you into this mess, you might consider telling the Inquisition they are no longer welcome in Dohlor. If you want assistance in kicking them out with their tails between their legs, we'll be delighted to provide it..." :P

In this case, the ICN is headed for Gorath in retribution for the death via the Punishment of several hundred Charisian POWs who surrendered to Thirsk in good faith, expecting to be treated according to the Laws of War. (Pre-jihad.) Their commander was Cayleb's flag captain at Armageddon Reef, and both Cayleb and Merlin were infuriated by the murder of their sailors and that there was nothing they could do to stop it. Time may have burned away some of the emotional intensity but not their thirst for justice. King Ronald recently turned a second batch of Charisian POWs over to the Inquisition, which were fortunately rescued. So perhaps the entire capital city of Dohlar will burn.

I doubt it.

Consider Ferayd, where Charis's response the the Inquisition incited massacre of Charisian merchant ship personnel was to level the waterfront and everything within two miles of it, and hang the Inquisitors who incited it. But they took pains to avoid civilian casualties and collateral damage. The Delferakan military took losses trying to defend Ferayd, but that would be expected by everybody. It's the military's job to die defending their country and people.

I don't see Charis being more vicious in reprisals against Dohlor. I think Cayleb and Sharleyan's attitude will be the sort of thing Prince Nahrman might say. If asked, his advice is likely to be "Shoot the leaders! Don't kill the poor guys just following orders and fighting for their country and their cause if you don't have to. Kill the ones who gave them the orders."

Perhaps a combination of Ferayd and Iythria - burn all the manufacturies of war materials, their supplies, and all their finished products. Burn the Dohlaran fleet, destroy the royal palace, and level every building within a predetermined distance from the harbor - and Gorath has a much larger harbor than Ferayd! Demand King Ronald's head on a pike, we can't forget that! (Thirsk is destined to serve on the regency council, after all!)

I think Cayleb and Sharleyan will settle for Rahnyld's head on a pike outside his palace, and Dohlor knocked out of the Jihad with a declaration of neutrality and a permanent non-aggression treaty.

This may seem like a bit much, but considering that it isn't much more than was required at Iythria, and Ferayd lost every building within a mile of the harbor for the deaths of a few dozen civilians, and for sending the survivors to Zion to face the Question and the Punishment. In Gorath's case, Cayleb and Sharley are seeking justice for the horrific torture and murder of hundreds of Charisian seamen who surrendered honorably under the laws of war, which precluded such treatment!

And the people you take measures against are those who allowed it to occur. That's Rahnyld and possibly some of his senior ministers. It doesn't mean the people who just happen to live in Gorath.

I'm sure Cayleb and Sharley decided on an equitable punishment long ago, but since they're also trying to knock Dohlar out of the war, dealing them a massive blow is going be necessary, and they can't work with a snake like King Ronald.

Remove and execute him, and they don't have to. I think his head with be the one real non-negotiable demand. His successor can sign the required treaties.

That's where Thirsk and Ahlverez and whoever else is willing to break from the jihad to save their country comes into the picture. The very survival of Dohlar as a nation is at stake. Millions of Siddarmarkans are screaming for blood, and the leaders of the army and navy have grave doubts about the cause they're serving, and even larger doubts about their ability to successfully defend their country. The eastern front between Dohlar and Siddarmark is bound to collapse under Hanth's reinforced assault sooner or later. Thirsk's fleet won't survive the "Battle" of Gorath, and by the time the battle arrives, Thirsk will be well aware of that.

I think Thirsk is already aware of that. His challenge has been to rebuild the Dohloran Navy into something that can face the ICN at sea, and he's likely well aware that the scarce resource is time. He needs to improve and expand the Dohloran Navy before Charis can divert significant ICN resources to deal with Dohlor, and everything he's heard courtesy of Bishop Maik will only tell him that Charis is building new ships even more powerful than the ones he'd have trouble taking now without a significant force advantage. If that new construction does come to call, he's screwed and he knows it.

He's not obligated to lead his fleet on a suicide mission, so when the KH VIIs appear, he can safely surrender his fleet and everyone will understand why and agree with his decision. (Except for the Inquisition, but nothing makes those guys happy except pulling the wings off of flies and torturing small, helpless animals.)

I'm afraid he'll have to take damage first. No one in Dohlor will understand what the KH VIIs are and can do, or will understand facing them is a suicide mission. They'll need to be taught a painful object lesson before Thirsk can order surrender. Given the history between Dohlor and Charis, his own people will want to fight, and will have to take nasty losses before they agree surrender is required.

Once Dohlar officially withdraws from the jihad, Thirsk technically hasn't committed treason or mutinied, since he was following the (eventual) lawful orders of his king. (Who is quite likely to be Ronald's son at that point, with Ronald either a Charisian prisoner for life, dead, or fled to Zion where Clyntahn will have him put to the Punishment as an example for any other rulers who might consider switching sides or declaring neutrality.)

If Rahnyld doesn't issue a royal order for Thirsk to have his Navy commit suicide, he's not committing mutiny or treason if he orders his navy to surrender honorably after taking losses facing an overwhelming enemy. But I'm afraid his navy will have to take its lumps first. He can't simply surrender when the KH VIIs appear, even if Merlin hastold him what he'll be facing. How does he justify it? Announce "Seijin Merlin appeared in my townhouse and showed me what the ICN had up it's sleeve"? :P

And I don't see Rahnyld being quite stupid enough to seek sanctuary in Zion, even if he could be sure he could get there. I'd say his days are numbered.
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Wow Dennis, you have some brilliant insights. And yeah, I was being a bit bloodthirsty when I wrote my original comment. PeterZ and I are pretty much agreed that Gorath won't burn - Ronald has to go, but Cayleb and Sharley need to add the velvet glove, so PeterZ's suggestion that they allow Dohlar to trade with South Harchong (and only South Harchong) makes extremely good sense.

I think it makes even better sense if you include my recommendation that rather than burning the RDN, the ICN removes most of the guns from each ship and allows Thirsk to use them as merchant escorts. That keeps his sailors busy, the hatchet gets buried, and we don't see wholesale slaughter from which the two country's relationship could never recover.

I'm not convinced exactly how much damage the RDN will have to suffer before Thirsk orders it to surrender. When 100 lb shells start landing around his ships while the KH VIIs are still a mile or two out of range of the RDN's most powerful guns, it becomes blatantly obvious that any combat at all will just get men killed unnecessarily. Plus accounts of the shelling of seaports all along the northern Gulf of Dohlar will have arrived in Gorath long before Thirsk sorties - if he does. His sailors will have heard the rumors, and their desire to fight is going to melt away when they see the plumes of those impossibly large and long-ranged shells spouting out of the water around them!

If Thirsk is still in port, let the KH VIIs shell the water a mile behind him, and he can order his ships to strike as quickly as they can reach their flags! The whole city will be sitting on their roofs to watch the spectacle, so if Thirsk plays it smart and keeps his ships in view from shore, everyone will see why he struck - especially if he fires or skips a few hundred cannonballs across Gorath Bay and they fall a mile short! Heck, the KH VIIs can level the docks behind him just to pound home the futility of fighting back!

Unfortunately I'm afraid that we're going to see at least one or more of his ships disappear in massive explosions as Charisian shells plunge through them and set off their magazines. Hundreds of men will die for nothing other than providing a fig leaf so Thirsk can surrender and rightfully state that if he didn't, he'd have lost every ship in his fleet - which he'll already know before the Cities and KH VIIs arrive.

The EoC has a use for the RDN. If they sign a treaty that allows Dohlar to trade with South Harchong and the allies, then the Royal navy will be desperately needed to escort civilian convoys. Desnair will be more than happy to try to raid Dohlaran shipping and I'm sure Clyntahn will put offer a nice reward (that Duchairn will point out they can't afford!) to any captain who captures a Dohlaran merchant vessel.

The Dohlaran merchant marine was stripped badly to fill out the ranks of the navy, so even with reduced crews, there probably aren't enough sailors in Dohlar to man the hulls available. Of course there isn't much to trade at the moment in non-war related goods, but Charis will work out a deal with Silkiah to use the Salthar canal, and a deal with South Harchong to open several of their ports to both Dohlar and the EoC.

I sincerely hope that the ICN can either convince or force Dohlar to turn over the leadership responsible for sending their sailors to be tortured and murdered in Zion. It would do Dohlar a lot of good long-term to get rid of Clyntahn's toadies, and to make sure that none of them end up on the regency council. Getting rid of the Inquisition would be a healthy move as well.

I'm sure Cayleb and Sharley wish they could dismantle the Dohlaran army, but they'll have to leave it in place so it can defend the country from the inevitable retribution for pulling out of the Jihad. There's a chance we could see the ICA fighting side-by-side with the Dohlarans inside Dohlar.

I'm not sure if they'll leave Thirsk's wizard in place though. He could have a bright future working for Howsmyn, and any future inventions he comes up with should definitely not be shared with the Inquisition!

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Re: ATST Snippet #1
Post by Sharp Claw   » Mon Aug 15, 2016 12:00 am

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When Merlin tells Thirsk that time is pressing and he still has a long way to go tonight , it makes me wonder if Merlin's next move will be to visit Ahlvarez?
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Re: ATST Snippet #1
Post by evilauthor   » Mon Aug 15, 2016 2:36 am

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Sharp Claw wrote:When Merlin tells Thirsk that time is pressing and he still has a long way to go tonight , it makes me wonder if Merlin's next move will be to visit Ahlvarez?


Eh, probably not. There's no prior connection or relationship between Alvarez and Merlin like there was with Thirsk. Even if the relationship with Thirsk amounts to nothing more than a single meeting, that's more than what Alvarez has.

Also, Alvarez doesn't think his family got blown up and needs to be told otherwise.
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Re: ATST Snippet #1
Post by Peter2   » Mon Aug 15, 2016 6:13 am

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Hmp. That's the second time that snippets have started to arrive when I couldn't immediately get at them. But it really is nice to have them. Thank you, RFC! :D

I know second-guessing our esteemed First Sea Lord doesn't have a high success rate, but I'm going to guess that the most devious thing the EoC could do is leave Dohlar to declare neutrality, while notifying it that payment (in one way or another :evil: ) for their treatment of the Charisian POWs that fell into their hands would be required. After all, how long do you think Clyntahn would allow that state of affairs to continue? That way, Dohlar has to sort itself out, and may end up having to request Charisian intervention — which is a whole heap different from being invaded.
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Re: ATST Snippet #1
Post by Randomiser   » Mon Aug 15, 2016 6:47 am

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Yay Snippets! I had stopped visiting the forum regularly so just found it.

Random thoughts

I think some posters are going a bit overboard with their own ideas and disregarding both general and specific background.

NO way South Harchong is going to allow trade with a neutral Dohlar. SH are part of the most fanatically Temple Loyalist country on Safehold. So that idea is out.

The future of the RDN fleet - the surviving ships will be joining the ICN as with every other defeated fleet we have seen. Why ever not? The ICN still has plenty of use for wooden sailing ships and resource problems about building enough of everything needed for the war. The only exceptions are where territories have become part of the EOC. For reasons posted by others that seems unlikely. You don't leave an active, organised, potentially hostile fleet behind you.

Bishop Maik is a serious anomaly and may become a moral problem for Charis. I've never really understood how someone as seemingly reasonable as him got appointed to or has been allowed to remain in a post as sensitive as Intendant to the RDN. Clyntahn must have personally approved him after all. I suppose one solution would be that Maik is just more subtle than the other intendants, managing and manipulating Thirsk by appearing sympathetic, while concealing his real views; he has never actually done anything contrary to the church's real interests after all. But there isn't any textev at all for that viewpoint as far as I can see.

Edit - On Thirsk's options/decisions - He takes his oath to King Ranahld seriously. However, if the King is not acting as a free agent in the interests of Dohlar but is clearly under coercion from the Inquisition in giving certain orders, what action does an oath to Ranahld require?

I think the interview with Thirsk is really well done, and the irony of the freedom to do whatever he thinks is right being the 'deadliest gift of all' for Thirsk is just wonderful.
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Re: ATST Snippet #1
Post by Randomiser   » Mon Aug 15, 2016 7:34 am

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I know the book has been turned in, but here are a couple of typos for the next edition. Not surprising given the rush.

"Of course they are , a voice said in the back of Thirsk’s brain. all, what’s a minor impossibility like that if he can be here at all?" "After all"?

“I’m not here tonight only for Cayleb and Sharleyan on, My Lord. I have a message for you from someone else, as well.” The "on" is just extraneous.
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Re: ATST Snippet #1
Post by chrisd   » Mon Aug 15, 2016 9:18 am

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DMcCunney wrote:* And speaking of which, a question I'd have for Dunstyn Oliver would be "If you wanted to make the fastest possible blue water capable steamship, how fast could it be?" A major issue the Empire faces is the fact that it spans a large area of ocean. Cayleb and Sharleyan already have the problem of transit times between Cheryath and Tellesburg to meet the constitution mandated requirement of having dual capital cities. Archbishop Michael will face even worse problems in traveling between the realms whose Church he is prelate of. I don't think the spare capacity exists to build them now, but I think fast VIP transports that can shrug off things like hurricanes and get senior Charisians to and from the various parts of the Empire in less time than it currently takes will be a definite need.Dennis


Unless you are going to "hydroplane" then "Froude's Law" applies relating maximum speed to waterline length

An approximate "hull speed" is given by 1.34 x √(waterline length) where the speed is in "knots" (6080 ft/hr) and the WL is in feet.
(Please revise for Safehold Units if so desired)
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Re: ATST Snippet #1
Post by PeterZ   » Mon Aug 15, 2016 10:09 am

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DMcCunney wrote:snip

* And speaking of which, a question I'd have for Dunstyn Oliver would be "If you wanted to make the fastest possible blue water capable steamship, how fast could it be?" A major issue the Empire faces is the fact that it spans a large area of ocean. Cayleb and Sharleyan already have the problem of transit times between Cheryath and Tellesburg to meet the constitution mandated requirement of having dual capital cities. Archbishop Michael will face even worse problems in traveling between the realms whose Church he is prelate of. I don't think the spare capacity exists to build them now, but I think fast VIP transports that can shrug off things like hurricanes and get senior Charisians to and from the various parts of the Empire in less time than it currently takes will be a definite need.
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Well Dennis, fast VIP transports could be something that other steel works could be working on. One suspects that her Highness Princess Irys in her capacity as Her Grace the Duchess of Darcos and daughter by marriage of the House of Ahrmahk will ask for and receive a significant portion of the gold backed zero coupon notes Cayleb will be issuing. Corisande has had a naval tradition and so having her nation develop their steel works into focusing on steam powered ocean going ships will be a natural.

Sure, acquiring the skill to make Housmanized steel armor will take time. Yet, fast steamers do not require thick face hardened steel. They can use good quality steel plate. Heck, I bet Her Highness would encourage her ship yards to bypass wood framing altogether. Also, with regions known as Black Water, one would suspect that oil is abundant and easily available in the Princedom.

Bottom line is fast transports are coming soon but not soon enough to be seen before the this story arc concludes.
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