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HFQ Official Snippet #20

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Re: HFQ Official Snippet #20
Post by runsforcelery   » Sun Mar 15, 2015 8:27 pm

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Peter2 wrote:
I wonder if there's any chance of Aivah Pahrsahn's organisation getting Thirsk and his family out from under the baleful eyes of their Inquisition guards?



No. :P :twisted: :lol:


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Re: HFQ Official Snippet #20
Post by McGuiness   » Sun Mar 15, 2015 8:47 pm

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tootall wrote:Well, I have to admit how wrong I was about the condition of his troops.
I recall that he took his supply train with him when he began his retreat and that he had several "intact" units left from the disaster. I assumed that he still had a "force in being". Guess not.
And given the state of his men, I don't know how they're going 300-500 miles more.
To quote another who sometimes posts here:

"BLEEK!"
Ah, to be plagiarized, the highest token of respect! :lol:

Since RFC invented "Bleek" I can't really accuse you of plagiarism, although I'd have phrased it something like "It looks like Ahlverez's prospects are . . . Bleek!"

However, since you alluded to how I rather enjoyed my identity as Nimitz13 on Eric Flint's site, I guess that makes me an educated source, so you're merely citing my work rather than stealing my words. ;)

Bleek! :twisted:

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Re: HFQ Official Snippet #20
Post by DrakBibliophile   » Sun Mar 15, 2015 9:16 pm

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Having a suspicious mind, I wonder if the Mighty Wizard Weber has another means in mind for "rescuing" Thirsk and his family. :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

Oh, Nice Snippet. :)

runsforcelery wrote:
Peter2 wrote:
I wonder if there's any chance of Aivah Pahrsahn's organisation getting Thirsk and his family out from under the baleful eyes of their Inquisition guards?



No. :P :twisted: :lol:
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Re: HFQ Official Snippet #20
Post by PeterZ   » Sun Mar 15, 2015 9:29 pm

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runsforcelery wrote:
Peter2 wrote:
I wonder if there's any chance of Aivah Pahrsahn's organisation getting Thirsk and his family out from under the baleful eyes of their Inquisition guards?



No. :P :twisted: :lol:


Let's rephrase. Is there a chance Nynian Rychtair's organization can get Thirsk or his family out from under the baleful eyes of their inquisition guards?
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Re: HFQ Official Snippet #20
Post by Peter2   » Sun Mar 15, 2015 9:30 pm

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runsforcelery wrote:
Peter2 wrote:
I wonder if there's any chance of Aivah Pahrsahn's organisation getting Thirsk and his family out from under the baleful eyes of their Inquisition guards?



No. :P :twisted: :lol:


Shucks! Oh well . . . :cry:
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Re: HFQ Official Snippet #20
Post by McGuiness   » Sun Mar 15, 2015 9:45 pm

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First thing, thank you RFC for another long and very insightful snippet. I hope you and your family are on the road to recovery from the battery of life's ills that have besieged you, and I hope our analysis of and conjecture about your story is worthy of the universe you've created for us to play in.

This is about the condition I expected the surviving Dohlaran army to be in at this point, although they're much farther from Thesmar and moving even more slowly than I'd anticipated once they ran out of highroads. I honestly don't see how they can skirt Thesmar and head for parts north before DE comes howling down the Fort Tairys - Thesmar highroad. Toss in an educational visit from Seijin Zhevons and there's no way this ragtag excuse of an army is going home again.

Ahlverez looks likely to become the ranking Dohlaran POW, unless Hanth suffers a notable defeat at Evrytyn. Since Hanth will be facing breech loading rifles, rifled artillery, and a few other nasty things the CoGA forces have copied from the ICA weapons list, the butcher's bill to drive the CoGA forces from Evrytyn may be higher than he is willing to pay. It's the first time that church forces will be fighting Charis with equivalent or better weapons in the entire series! Of course Hanth can cut the canal behind the Dohlarans and force them to retreat - and the Delthak is shrieking its way upriver and Evrytyn is within cannon range :twisted:

Hanth has done all this as a marine officer, not an army officer, and without the aid of a seijin or the advantages of being part of the inner circle. Either he's a naturally gifted strategist or he has good aides - which he does now , since several thousand ICA regulars have joined him.

Obviously his "fight with superior weapons on a field of my choosing" style has worked well, as has his "pursue the enemy closely when he's in full retreat" policy. I'm rather fond of his "sail an ironclad up the river to send the Dohlaran's to meet the archangels" strategy as well! :twisted:

I feel a bit less worried about 40,000 (and dwindling) survivors of the Army of Shiloh staggering around behind Hanth's main forces after this snippet. I'd feel even better if Seijin Zhevons showed up, or if Hanth received some clandestine reports of enemy movements penned by OWL...

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Re: HFQ Official Snippet #20
Post by Keith_w   » Sun Mar 15, 2015 9:47 pm

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DrakBibliophile wrote:Having a suspicious mind, I wonder if the Mighty Wizard Weber has another means in mind for "rescuing" Thirsk and his family. :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

Oh, Nice Snippet. :)

[quote="runsforcelery" quote="Peter2"

I wonder if there's any chance of Aivah Pahrsahn's organisation getting Thirsk and his family out from under the baleful eyes of their Inquisition guards? /quote


No. :P :twisted: :lol:/

There is a point in LAMA (if I recall correctly) where Thirsk thinks to himself about his secret plans which I assumed will concern rescuing his family, and may have something to do with the Duke shoot which occurred in a previous snippet
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Re: HFQ Official Snippet #20
Post by Keith_w   » Sun Mar 15, 2015 9:53 pm

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Thank you very much for the snippet RFC. I am sure that we all hope that things are going well in the household.

I think the best thing for the ICA would be for Ahlvarez's men to become POWs. If the succeed in retuning to Dohlar, they will become the core of a new, experienced fighting force that will like nothing better than to avenge their treatment at the heretics hands. In short, rather than supporting the church, it will have become personal for them, as well as theological.
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Re: HFQ Official Snippet #20
Post by McGuiness   » Sun Mar 15, 2015 10:11 pm

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DrakBibliophile wrote:Having a suspicious mind, I wonder if the Mighty Wizard Weber has another means in mind for "rescuing" Thirsk and his family. :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

Oh, Nice Snippet. :)
runsforcelery wrote:
Peter2 wrote:I wonder if there's any chance of Aivah Pahrsahn's organisation getting Thirsk and his family out from under the baleful eyes of their Inquisition guards?

No. :P :twisted: :lol:
Oh dear, the Voice of God on Safehold has spoken!

Those of us who have had the misfortune to have spent far too much time on these forums over the years, and thus have been the victims of RFC's . . . misdirections, know better than to believe him when he makes a clear, direct declaration about anything! So all he said here is that Aivah's organization won't be involved in spiriting Thirsk's family away from the tender guardianship of the Inquisition, not that it won't happen!

Since most readers respect Thirsk and wished he weren't playing for the wrong team, getting him to defect has long been a fond dream of ours. I've postulated that we're more likely to see a seijin involved in spiriting his family away if some sort of derring do is required, although the best sort of derring do is when the inquisitors notice that their charges are missing only after those charges have been missing for some time. Now that there's a female seijin, rescuing Thirsk's family might be a bit easier. Of course Thirsk would have to be at sea so he isn't immediately executed for treason... ;)

Seriously, if his family disappears, he's a dead man. If he's killed in battle or "something" then there's no reason to keep his family under the "protection" of the Inquisition. So if there's some skullduggery afoot, the seijins, Aivah, and the EoC may not have to be involved at all! (Other than the EoC serving as a sanctuary for Thirsk's corpse and his grieving family of course!) :lol:

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Re: HFQ Official Snippet #20
Post by BobG   » Sun Mar 15, 2015 11:00 pm

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McGuiness wrote:I feel a bit less worried about 40,000 (and dwindling) survivors of the Army of Shiloh staggering around behind Hanth's main forces after this snippet. I'd feel even better if Seijin Zhevons showed up, or if Hanth received some clandestine reports of enemy movements penned by OWL...

I think it is to Hanth's advantage to let The Army of Shiloh keep on going toward St. Alek's, for a while, at least. With every mile they go, the more starved they are, and the less prepared for combat they are. With Hanth's ironclads, barges, supplies, and fresh troops, they could choose an ideal location for an ambush, ring it with mines and entrenchments, and when Ahlverez walks into it, oops. For that matter, the impact on morale after they think they might get away would be significant. I don't think he'd even put up much of a fight.

It does occur to me that Hanth's forces may not be the most critical ones to go after. Pushing toward Silk Town, and pushing the Dohlarens back may be more important. They are probably the best price-performace option for removing CoGA troops from the scene, however.

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